The Wizard’s Apprentice, part 1

[sythyry]

Mirrored from Sythyry.

Welcome!

Welcome to Sythyry’s City, the third story cycle, slice-of-life diary, soap opera, and doomfest about the blue lizard and friends. This will be structured somewhat differently than previous cycles: more of a series of short stories and vignettes interspersed with proper diary entries. Here’s the first one.

The Wizard’s Apprentice

Feralan, the wizard’s apprentice, skulked to the schoolroom on the first day of his classes, as if hoping that nobody and nothing would notice him. He would have succeeded, too, except that he stopped to admire the bellying curve of the floating city’s walls. He ran his fingers over it without looking, and instinctively and correctly identified its shape as a cylinder of rotation of the Witch of Agnesi. He thought a moment about its equation, x(y²+1)=1 since it was vertical, and smiled.

A peculiarly-shaped creature saw him pause and smile. Feralan analyzed its appearance in an instant. It evidently had two legs — probably two, he thought, because that voluminous purple skirt could conceal another one or two, or any number of other organs and appendages of moderate size and nearly arbitrary purpose. But a pair of bare brown-furred feet or paws, their short claws painted purple to match the skirt, could be seen peeking out from under it, so Feralan could assert with some confidence that there were at least the two.

One torso, protruding vertically above the skirted presumed juncture of the legs, clad in a tunic of clean lavender fabric, with a peculiar glyph located centrally. And a pair of matched swellings probably indicative of some sort of gland — quite likely the creature was a female, assuming that such distinctions even applied to beings of that sort.

Continuing on in the vertical was a short joining structure surmounted by … Feralan supposed it might be called a head. It had a pair of bright black eyes surrounded by a mask of black fur, and a pair of rounded ears set high on the back, and a short muzzle bristling with glassy whiskers and modest but gleaming fangs and incisors. Its expression was incomprehensible, unreadable, obscure.

From the top of the torso extended a symmetrical pair of further appendages, evidently constructed to be some sort of compromise between sinuous and rigid. The upper or proximal parts of the appendges were hidden in tubes of the lavender fabric joined with the tunic. The lower or distal parts were fur-covered, rings of brownish-black and of white. The appendages pentafurcated at their ends into complex, asymmetrically structured (but mirror images of each other) clusters of smaller appendages, brown-furred on one side, furless and black-skinned on the other. These appendages terminated in short claws, painted lavender to match the tunic. Feralan noticed this especially, as the creature was gesticulating strangely to him with the appendage. He flinched back, instinctively lifting an arm to protect himself.

And then, to his horror, he saw that his own limb was just such an appendage as the creature’s. Brown-furred, albeit somewhat lighter than the creature’s; pentafurcated, with both the sub-appendages and the larger appendage under his control. The upper part of it was even wrapped in a tube of lavender fabric. There were only two notable differences. First was the claws, which, in his case, had been left unpainted.

Second was the bracelet: a loop of eight disks around his wrist, painted in the shapes of eight strange creatures. The creature before him loosely matched one on the bracelet, with the label “Rassimel” over it — and, unlike any other disk on the bracelet, a perfectly circular and shining circle of silver. A perfectly circular and shining and reflective circle. A glance at it told him that, somehow, the rest of his body loosely matched the creature’s, the “Rassimel”‘s.

Feralan took a deep breath, and reminded himself, for the sixty-third time that day (it was still early), that he was a Rassimel. He was born a Rassimel. He had always been a Rassimel, in body at least, and that only his medical condition made the matter seem unfamiliar. That Rassimel were among the most common and ordinary sort of civilized peoples. That waving an appendage — a hand — was an ordinary gesture, though he couldn’t remember what it meant.

The whole incident, from terrified observation of the strange creature to remembering that it and he were ordinary persons, had taken under two seconds this time. It rarely took longer than four seconds, and never more than six. It never took less than two seconds, either.

The creature — no, the girl, for she was an adolescent of about Feralan’s own age — spoke. Her speech was a strange conglomeration of fricatives, aspirants, and approximants, glued together with rushy vowels. Feralan worked to puzzle out her words, imagining them printed in fine type on cream-colored paper:

Hello, new boy. Are you lost?

Well, that could mean nearly anything. Perhaps she was asking if he was outside of the safe regions — if he was en prise, unguarded, easy to attack? A bit of thought suggested that was unlikely; Rassimel rarely attacked each other, even on neutral territory. But what did her words convey? The simple literal meaning? An assertion of authority and status over him? An invitation, a rejection, an alliance, a defiance?

If he could only have understood her words as she spoke them, without mentally writing them down, the situation would have been much clearer. Or if he could have glanced at his notes — he had a neat little handbook of facial expressions and what they meant. He had left it behind, in his apartments off the wizard Sythyry’s laboratory. The sorceress Phaniet — who knew about these things — suggested that relying on it at school would make him look weird and disconcerting to the other students.

Which is just how they, and every normal person, would appear to him.

He temporized. He extended a hand, fought down the instant of disorientation and dismay when he saw what his hand looked like, and wiggled his fingers in the same gesture that the girl had done. “I’m Feralan. I’m here for Miss Qualsohn’s class. In … in there?”

The girl’s face deformed: whiskers spreading, lips widening, fangs and incisors becoming more prominent. The gesture might have meant anything, or been some involuntary biological process at work and meant nothing. She spoke again, and Feralan saw her words as:

That's where I go too, so you can come with me. I'm Wexiset.

Comments

[terrycloth.livejournal.com]

Let's see... I think it's an assertion of authority and status, an invitation, and an alliance.

[delight-in.livejournal.com]

Oh no I don't think you should've told him to leave his notes behind Sythyrs.

[sythyry.livejournal.com]

Actually, this isn't from his notes. It's my best reconstruction of his first day of school (part 1 -- a few more to come). He is now, as I think is obvious, my apprentice; and he has been my responsibility for a while longer than that. I have been trying my best to understand him: this is that attempt.

He read my vignette, and made me change a number of things to make it accurate. He adds that he's not generally that bad, but certain situations -- such as being outside of his safe spaces, or meeting new people, or too much conversation -- do exacerbate his flaws.

He doesn't keep a diary.

[delight-in.livejournal.com]

Ohhhh noooo I meant his notes on what expressions mean but I guess that was Phaniet's idea not to bring them more than yours and maybe it'll be okay once he gets used to the school.

[sythyry.livejournal.com]

Ah, I beg your pardon! It was Phaniet's idea, indeed.

[terrana.livejournal.com]

[Okay, now I have to wonder if the Delight we're seeing in these comments is one from the same time period of several-years-later that Sythyry's City is set in, or if it's the current just-back-from-the-adventure one getting messages from the future...]

[kris-schnee.livejournal.com]

She's an orren. Can't they get excited enough to forget which year they're in? =)

[tuftears.livejournal.com]

How curious! Feralan is an alien to himself and his own society, it appears. Perhaps he needs a familiar who can serve as a translator and go-between.

[sythyry.livejournal.com]

You know who his familiar is, don't you? Alas, not the best go-between.

[tuftears.livejournal.com]

Oh right, hCevian! I counted him as Feralan's friend... Sort of like a roomie.

[rowyn]

He needs a familiar more familiar with the familiar sights of World Tree!

[heavenscalyx.livejournal.com]

So he not only has this perceptual and cognitive damage, but also damage to his memory function? Or is it that when he's in unfamiliar surroundings, his memory sort of shorts out?

I suspect he's going to turn into the sort of wizard who lives alone in a tower and has someone come in once a day to make sure he eats, bathes, and changes his clothes, alas.

[sythyry.livejournal.com]

Not exactly. He can remember things just fine. He simply has to think consciously about certain topics which you (I presume) and I (I know) think about instinctively. It's rather like the suffocating curse which -- while not interfering in the slightest with one's ability to breathe -- obligates one to breathe consciously or not at all.

And generally, he doesn't need his reference manual; he can remember it perfectly well. On the first day of school, he was in a bit of a nervous state, and didn't always try to do so.

But yes: he has already been that sort of apprentice, for about nine or ten years out of the last seven. (He's fine on tending his body, except for the obligatory but fleeting moments of panic when he sees what body it is.)

Phaniet and I put up with it for a while, but decided (somewhat to his dismay) that he must go to school -- as much to learn how to be a Rassimel, or to fake it at least, as to learn any academic content.

[postrodent.livejournal.com]

This is a lovely bit of writing-the-alien. Nice work.

[sythyry.livejournal.com]

[Thank you! Of course absolutely none of it is based on any sort of personal experience. -bb]

[ladyperegrine.livejournal.com]

*hugs*

[archadia.livejournal.com]

I am very very amused because I actually have always, as long as I was very literate, seen others' words in text as they speak them. Each of my friends has his own assigned color and font and style depending on who it is and the tone he is using. So interesting to see this happening to someone/ones else!

[sythyry.livejournal.com]

[Yeek! I didn't know anyone actually had this condition! I hope you find my presentation of it inoffensive! -=bb]

[archadia.livejournal.com]

[I am not offended, but comforted, instead! Therapists say it is not harmful, plus I remember things better if I 'see' them written down. Is it really a condition with a fancy name and everything? Like a kind of synesthesia? (Smells have colors!)]

[zeeth_kyrah]

It is in fact a kind of synesthesia, and I occasionally experience it with the words of spirits who need to get a message through and aren't being heard properly.

[archadia.livejournal.com]

Oh! I had thought that synesthesia only had to do with colors-and-senses kinds of things, but maybe this does! *ponder*

[sythyry.livejournal.com]

[My concept of synesthesia is, any mixing of impressions from one sense with those of another.]

[alex-muridae.livejournal.com]

Do pardon my interruption, but I believe it is indeed - while it is more common for people to simply see colors based on sounds, yours is not unheard of. Yours is, if I understand correctly, a transfer of heard language impressions to visual impressions. I'm not a specialist in such things by any means, but I'm guessing it would be termed a audio-lexical->grapheme synesthesia, or something close.

I must admit, I am a little jealous. With a little work I can make myself mentally scribble what a person says, but it's nothing so easy as simply having them write before my eyes - that would make learning other languages so much easier for me.

If you'll pardon a curious question, if they speak a language that uses a different alphabet (Japanese/Russian/etc) - or even one that simply uses different phonetics (Spanish/French/etc), how does it appear?

[sythyry.livejournal.com]

I must ask Feralan this unusual question!

After some discussion with Feralan, I believe that I have failed to describe his approach perfectly. He does not hear sounds as text. He hears sounds as fairly raw phonetics, or perhaps phonemics, and mentally transcribes them into text, which he can then read. Being rather clever of the brain, he can do so nearly as fast as people speak -- though an Orren in a rush can exceed even Feralan's speed.

In any case, he transcribes them in the orthography of Vheshrame. Which, while not perfect, is adequate for many Ketherian languages. I daresay he would have a great difficulty with more radically different tongues.

[archadia.livejournal.com]

Wow thanks for the lingo. I didn't know there were so many different types. I assumed synesthesia only applied to when I thought the farm smelled slate gray or if the bedroom smells fuchsia.

If it is a language I speak well, like Spanish, or moderately well, like Italian, I see the words spelled in that language. «¿Cómo te vayas?»

If it is a language I don't understand, my brain types it phonetically: "hors d'oeuvres" becomes "or-dervz" "本" becomes "nee-hon" or "ni-hon".
Even local dialects get phonetically stenographed. "Ah dun tol you, foo'! Take dat lef' turn roun' Balmer Street. Den you be dere."

I am a bit blushy! It's not often I have people jealous of me. *^_^*

[stormydragon.livejournal.com]

Damn synesthetes, make me feel so yellow! ;)

[kistaro]

Whoa, I thought I was the only one for whom that happened, although it's not an "always" so much as a "usually". I'm more likely to correctly interpret what's being said.

I'm more likely to interpret nonhuman sounds in such a way. The local crows "caw" in all-caps unpunctuated Impact.

[archadia.livejournal.com]

Closed captioning brought to you by Synesthesia, Inc! *^_^*

[ladyperegrine.livejournal.com]

Yes. This. Beautiful and also sad.

[sythyry.livejournal.com]

[Thanks!]

[terrana.livejournal.com]

Eeeee! More Sythyry! *happy-splode*

[bloofox.livejournal.com]

hCevian and Ferelan have always (or at least since they started existing) been two of my favourite fictional characters, and if this is any indication, they just keep getting better.

[cowboy-r.livejournal.com]

I like this very much.

[kris-schnee.livejournal.com]

Interesting to see more of Feralan, but... OOC, I think you overdid the style and made it unapproachable for new readers. You can convey the severe autism-like problem he has without going on for that many paragraphs or using words like "pentafurcated". Maybe try rewriting it at half the length? Or throwing in a paragraph from the girl's saner perspective?

[bloofox.livejournal.com]

I think 'pentafurcated' works fairly well in the context, which struck me as not so much autistic as having ones sense of empathy and body-image scooped out and replaced with an intuitive and instinctual grasp of geometry and topology. Though completely new readers might be thrown since they don't know about the entanglement and spirisection.

[kris-schnee.livejournal.com]

I was thinking more about this today since the new part is out. That word is going to throw a lot of people who lack high SAT Verbal scores.

Some time ago, Bard posted a story opening that struck me as showing a neat, unique setting... but so exotic that there was nothing normal for us readers to orient around. This story's different in that at least the context -- a kid showing up for school -- is recognizable, but I still think many readers will stumble over the style. (I do like his writing; I'm just critiquing.)

[sianmink.livejournal.com]

I doubt it's all going to be this style. It's interesting to see at least how the world tree looks from Feralan's perspective.

[sythyry.livejournal.com]

[Heavens, no. This vignette -- three or four entries -- is the only piece that will be from Feralan's point of view. Unless of course another one comes up and bites me, as might happen. -bb]

[archadia.livejournal.com]

I have to disagree with you and agree with Bloo.

[gavinfox.livejournal.com]

Uh, Sythyry... what year and month in your calendar are you writing (I guess transcribing from Feralan's account?) this?

[sythyry.livejournal.com]

The first day of school, of course!

[gavinfox.livejournal.com]

Uhm... was that you Feralan?

[sythyry.livejournal.com]

It is the first of Nivvem, 4393.