[identity profile] terrycloth.livejournal.com 2010-06-09 08:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Let's see... you're essentially imprisoning them indefinately, which is probably fair. They'll be forced to work but otherwise allowed to pretend to have a normal life, though? Is that how indentures of that sort work? Or are they going to be chained up in a closet?

Cutting off their ears is weird. Rheng could have helped with it, though!
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[personal profile] rowyn 2010-06-09 09:09 pm (UTC)(link)
I want Z & T to recognize what they did, and how wrong it was, and how devastating it could have been for dozens of their friends. I'd've liked their punishment to reflect that somehow. Not badly enough to make you redo it, though.

[identity profile] elorie.livejournal.com 2010-06-09 10:06 pm (UTC)(link)
As indentures, do they keep any of the money produced by their work, or does it all go to the holder of the indenture? If the former, they should pay you some amount out of that until all the money they *cost* you (ie, all the money you won't get back) is paid off.

I am not crazy about the ear thing, as it could have unforeseen health consequence (damage to the inside of the ear, for example, or a propensity for infections). But you could perhaps dock their ears, enough to make the spell work and to be visible, without cutting off the whole ear.

I would be inclined to be more lenient if this had been done purely as a reaction to what happened to Feralan, as I would be pretty freaked out if my son got accidentally crossed with a demon, and might do things I otherwise wouldn't. But Zascalle was apparently planning this for a long time.

[identity profile] sythyry.livejournal.com 2010-06-09 11:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Usually indentured servants get a modest wage, enough to live on. I don't know what Saza intends there. Zie intends that they do scutwork in a Herethroy farming village -- assistant kitchen work, say, and housecleaning, and helping at the harvest. So they wouldn't be generating any money, the way that Dorze did. The village has communal housing and food, which presumably they will share with Zascalle and Thiane, so their basic living costs will be low.


They will have cost me roughly a million lozens [about ten million $US -bb]. I can't imagine how they could possibly pay off any fraction of that significant enough to be worth mentioning -- certainly not doing scutwork, and probably not doing any job we would trust them with. Fortunately a fair amount of that goes to Saza, who (a) needs it and (b) will be doing an errand I very much need doing, so it's not utterly without value.


We don't much want to employ them in any position that requires trust.

I don't need the whole of the outer ear, though I do want most of it, because it is a punishment as well as a practicality. I, or any master-healer, should be able to deal with most health consequences. I won't be taking the inner ear.

I agree with your last point altogether. I am pretty freaked out that my client and friend got accidentally crossed with a demon!

[identity profile] sythyry.livejournal.com 2010-06-09 11:06 pm (UTC)(link)
They'll be forced to work, and kept in a village of Herethroy who regard them as foreign criminals. A normal life, I suppose, but hardly a rich one.

[identity profile] stormydragon.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 12:22 am (UTC)(link)
I think Zascalle's punishment was fair (albeit not entirely sure about the lifetime aspects of the indenture) but I think Thiane's crime was less (both in terms of her acts and her culpability for those acts) and she deserved a lesser sentence.

[identity profile] stormydragon.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 12:23 am (UTC)(link)
Short of mentador, you can't really MAKE people feel remorse.

[identity profile] stormydragon.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 12:26 am (UTC)(link)
Or at least a more obvious path to rehabilitation.

[identity profile] sythyry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 12:30 am (UTC)(link)
The two were nearly-equal partners in crime, as far as I know. Thiane surrendered more nicely, to be sure, and was not in a primary position of responsibility.

The details of the indenture are up to Saza --- though I am sure zie will consult with me --- and it need not be lifetime, nor does it need to be the same for the two of them. For that matter, the loss of the external ears need to be lifetime either.

[identity profile] stormydragon.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 01:06 am (UTC)(link)
I don't see how they could be equal partners given that Thiane had neither the oppurtunity nor the knowledge to participate much with the actual embezzling part versus just the escape.
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[personal profile] rowyn 2010-06-10 01:11 am (UTC)(link)
Lady MacBeth didn't actually stab the king herself, but nonetheless she had a high degree of involvement in the murder. If you are encouraging your partner to embezzle, and spending the money that you know she got by embezzling, and helping her plan how to get away with embezzling her employer's entire fortune .... I'd say the fact that you weren't actually the one signing the account transfers to move the money does not mean you weren't a full participant in the crime.

[identity profile] aenodia.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 01:34 am (UTC)(link)
Even if they are not able to make a significant amount of money there still needs to be a sense of making restitution in addition to punishment. In most cases of embezzlement restitution is part of the sentence.

[identity profile] elorie.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 01:57 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, I knew the term would be approximately forever. It had more to do with the repayment being an aspect of the punishment; they would be thinking about why they had to pay that money the rest of their lives.

And if you put all the money they paid into an account with interest, it would eventually equal the amount you lost. Long after they were dead.

[identity profile] nekomavin.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 01:59 am (UTC)(link)
I feel the taking of the ears is striking, and given that it potentially can be healed, about right. The vengeful side of me thinks that there should be a more permanent mark associated with the betrayal - how hard would it to be to make it difficult to heal? Difficult enough that a routine spell from the village healer would not suffice, but not so difficult that you'd have any difficulty regrowing said ears if you by some strange turning of events felt that you needed to.

Though if the regrowth of the ears is in and of itself fairly difficult, it seems unlikely that either will be able to afford to have it done.

[identity profile] sythyry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 02:01 am (UTC)(link)
Bank accounts don't have interest.
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[personal profile] rowyn 2010-06-10 02:03 am (UTC)(link)
That just means you'd have to wait even longer. Until they started paying you interest.

[identity profile] elorie.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 02:11 am (UTC)(link)
Ahhh. They do here, or they can. I'm a little fuzzy on the details, but it has to do with how our monetary system works and the fact that banks loan out money...basically, if you keep your money in a "savings" account (on which there are withdrawal limitations) the bank will pay you a small interest rate, because they know the money will be available for them to loan out (at a higher rate of interest) to people who want to buy houses or land. You can get a higher interest rate if you agree to leave the money there for a certain amount of time (three to five years is typical); that's called a certificate of deposit.

[identity profile] sythyry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 02:12 am (UTC)(link)
You live in an alien and wondrous world!

[identity profile] terrycloth.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 02:16 am (UTC)(link)
Invest the money in a share in someone's business venture which is likely to eventually grow large and successful, then?

[identity profile] sythyry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 02:17 am (UTC)(link)
That sometimes works!

[identity profile] kris-schnee.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 02:37 am (UTC)(link)
Imprisoning them somewhere with fresh air and decent work, with a chance of freedom eventually, probably with opportunities to make more trouble for Sythyry by her known covert skills, and regular chances to see their kids and poison them against Sythyry while teaching them how to be felons themselves. It's not really even fair to the kids, who get to go on "learning" from the cold-hearted thieves instead of getting a new and more worthwhile family.

[identity profile] sythyry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 02:54 am (UTC)(link)
I'm not sure I understand. Without air, they would die; if I wished to kill them, I would simply kill them. The kids will have as worthwhile a family as we can scare up. And if I can't protect myself from a penniless ex-accountant, I'm not much of a wizard, am I?

[identity profile] sythyry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 05:17 am (UTC)(link)
A grin! Healing ears is not so difficult. Observe, in two or three days, how I make use of this fact to give Saza an extra lever to use upon them!

[identity profile] xolo.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 05:25 am (UTC)(link)
I think cutting off an ear (without healing it) is frankly kind of harsh. I can understand the desire to keep some sort of magical connection to the pair, but I wouldn't maim them like that. An unexpected display of mercy might help to engender guilt, especially in Thiane, who does strike me as salvageable.

I think a Herethroy village sounds a good, calm environment, conducive to repentance and reform.

From curiosity, don't Ochirion and Feralan have a sort of magical linkage to Zascalle, at least? Could she not be traced through them?

[identity profile] sythyry.livejournal.com 2010-06-10 05:36 am (UTC)(link)
Perhaps the cropped ears will arouse pity. Perhaps it will just keep the memory of their crimes alive among people who were not directly involved.

Zascalle could, perhaps, be traced through Ochirion -- I am less certain about Feralan; I should not like to try; I might get ahold of his other half's mother instead, which could be socially or militarily awkward. That connection is not as direct as a body-part; it is a matter of some elaborate magic. And, of course, if Zascalle should somehow depart and bring her children with her, that approach would be considerably more challenging.

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