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A Hundred Lessons in Srineian [Vheshrame; various past dates]

Jyondre has been teaching everyone how to speak Sriniean.

The vocabulary isn't hard. It's rather like Ketherian, mangled a bit in some pretty regular ways. Thiane has a bag on her leg; Sriane has a baglo on her legro. Grinwipey uses a club; Srinwipey uses a clubb. Sythyry casts a spell; Srythyry casts a spell.

The status markers, though. I will never get the status markers.

First of all, there are two kinds of status: social status and historical status. So, the children of the original colonists are important in the language in ways that the unhistoried never can be, even if the unhistoried are heroes and nobles.

Second, they use status markers everywhere. Actually they don't, but they can.

Social status:

nob Nobility
edu Educated
low Low social status
huh Used when the speaker doesn't know the right social marker.

Historical status:

colo Descent from the original colonists (and -- nobody else? heroes and jivu are OK? I don't know.)
hero Heroes
jivu People who have undergone the jivu ceremony, which I don't know much about, but it's pretty hard.
unhi "Unhistoried". No historical status
dono Dunno your historical status, bud.

You can tack either or both markers on pronouns, so you can quite economically say "I -- an educated hero -- ask you -- a noble of newcomer ancestry -- to remove your(still noble and unhistoried) foot from my (still educated and heroic) tail." People only do that when they're really trying to make a point of status. Which you might do if you were high-status and trying to domineer someone, or low-status and trying to get a favor from someone.

Names can get one marker as a suffix.

Jyondre:(to the class)"So how would you refer to the Zi Ri?"

Inconnu:"Sythyry-nobo"

Jyondre:"Oh, great staring gods, no, no, not that!"

Inconnu:"Why? What does it mean?"

Jyondre:"It's a rather nasty word for a rather pleasant activity, and I don't think Sythyry is physically or emotionally capable of it anyways."

Me:"I am not utterly unskilled at pleasant activities."

Jyondre:"Well, this one is strictly cisaffectionate."

Inconnu:"Oh! Sythyry would never never never do that!" [He wriggled at me, which is nice to look at. But I am not taking lovers among my clients. That is simply not appropriate.]

Me:"Back to the language lesson, please."

Thiane:"Sythyry-nob"

Jyondre:"Exactly!"

Me:"Well, it's not quite a current title. Duke Conturge confirmed it over a century ago, but his successors have not done. They were more worried about Castle Wrong, and less about Vae. It's a species title, so they don't exactly need to confirm it, but ... I don't actually use it much. And it's just 'Esquire', which isn't a very big title anyways. If I'm trying to look like an important and respectable citizen these decades, I use a title like 'master-smith' or 'master-healer'."

Thiane:"Then Sythyry-unhi."

Jyondre:"No, you always pick a higher title if there is one. If zie's unhi -- and all of you are unhi -- use a social status title."

Thiane:"Sythyry-low?"

Jyondre:"No, no. Sythyry-edu, remember the -edu title?"

Me:"It is Sythyry-low, actually. I never finished the Academy."

Jyondre:"You didn't?"

Me:"I was spending too much time with monsters and lovers and things. So, Sythyry-low, or Sythyry-unhi. She's Thiane-edu, though."

Jyondre:"But you're the wizard, aren't you...?"

Me:"Yes."

Jyondre:"Oh, dear. It'll be very confusing to have Sythyry-low as the wizard and Thiane-edu as a subordinate. It could be troublesome in polite society."

Thiane:"I can be Thiane-low."

Jyondre:"No, no, no! Never give up your status markers!"

Me:"Should I do the jivu ceremony before we go?"

Jyondre:"Impossible, impossible! You know nothing of the jivu. And it cannot be done in Choinxeia."

Me:"What should we do?"

Jyondre:"Maybe Sythyry could be more assertive about claiming nobility, and everyone could call zir-nob as Sythyry-nob?"

Thiane:"Whatever makes sense"

Tingula:"Couldn't we just speak Ketherian altogether?"

Me:"Or use -dono and -huh for each other all the time?"

Jyondre:"No, no, you must know each others' history if you know each other! Everyone would know you were lying! No, the calling of nobility is best."

So we're going to pretend I'm really a noble, instead of the vaguely sort of as-long-as-nobody-is-pushing-anything only-really-inside-Vheshrame-city-limits kind of noble that I really am.

Thiane:"Wait, didn't you say professions plus history markers could be used as titles? So zie could be Enchanter-unhi Sythyry."

Jyondre:"Zie can't call zirself that, though. It's gauche for the unhi to use professional titles for themselves. And it would emphasize that zie's unhi."

Me:"Nobody would expect a tourist from Ketheria to have historical status, would they?"

Jyondre:"No, but ..."

Thiane:"What do Ketherian tourists do?"

Jyondre:"We don't get very many Ketherian tourists. You're surely not the first, but, well, you are the first that I-edu-jivu have heard of."

Inconnu:"Wait, are there really 144 pronouns? Twelve choices for species, times three markers for status, times four for history?"

Jyondre:"Nope. Three hundred and eighty. There are five choices for social status (nob, edu, low, plus 'huh' if you don't know and just leaving it off), and six for historical status (colo, hero, jivu, unhi, and 'dono' and nothing). Don't worry, they're regular. Also they're not used very often."

Inconnu:"Then why are we learning them?"

Jyondre:" Because they help you understand the twenty pronouns that you actually do use. Which don't use the suffixes, they're just different. They're for things like 'a prime of low status', and 'a Rassimel of colonial descent'." He later admitted that the twelve usual Ketherian pronouns are used too -- those tell species, but don't have any status markers.

Everyone but Jyondre: "Can we please fall over and die from the confusion and overwhelmedness?"

Jyondre:"No! Not until I cover verb forms!"

Everyone but Jyondre:"Merciless foreigner!"

(And, if you really want to know, there are a few verbs that can only be used by certain statuses. Nobles can say 'want-nob'; everyone else just says 'want'. (Actually the contrast is more like 'kippliwere' and 'want'. You wouldn't guess that the words had anything to do with each other.) And there are a few other verbs that can only be used about certain statuses. So I, as a person of low social status, would carry-low (or 'gleddah') a load, but if someone tried to say that educated Jyondre or Thiane would gleddah a load, they'd get beaten up or even mocked.)

Inconnu:[In Sriniean]"Sythyry must be our porter! Zie-low will gleddah all our luggage!"

(Much laughter. I would fit inside anyone's suitcase; I cannot carry such large things!)

Adjectives and adverbs are safe though.

Everyone but Yerenthax:"We will speak only in adjectives and adverbs! Truly! Wonderful! Truly wonderful!"

Jyondre:"Understandable?"

Everyone:"Unlikely! Greatly unlikely!"

Jyondre:"Socially-acceptable?"

Everyone:"Scarcely! Heinously scarcely!"

Jyondre:"Then the lessons will resume until morale and syntax both improve."

I am not going to write my journal in Sriniean though!

[And, as usual, the translation will be into normal English, and status markers will be handled elsewise. -bb]

Date: 2009-03-02 02:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chipuni.livejournal.com
What happens if someone is descended from the original colonists, but goes through the jivu ceremony? Does their social status drop?

Date: 2009-03-02 02:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sythyry.livejournal.com
I don't know. Jyondre-jivu says-jivu I-unhi don't-unhi understand-unhi what he-jivu's talking-jivu about about the jivu ceremony. I concur[Ketherian].

Date: 2009-03-02 02:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mmsword.livejournal.com
Eventually one of these foreign tongues shall place a vowel within your name.

Date: 2009-03-02 03:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] terrycloth.livejournal.com
Is Vae going through these lessons, or is she going to learn the language in the usual way?

Date: 2009-03-02 03:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sythyry.livejournal.com
She didn't take the lessons; they were in the city. I daresay she will be discreet about it.

Date: 2009-03-03 12:20 am (UTC)
rowyn: (smile)
From: [personal profile] rowyn
Wait, what? Vae? Discreet? Has she changed so much in just one century? Wow!

Date: 2009-03-03 12:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sythyry.livejournal.com
She always could be discreet.

Well, for a minute or two. Sometimes even three.

And that's all it should take.

And she is a monster, after all.

Date: 2009-03-02 03:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kobolds.livejournal.com
Having lived on a border with another nation myself, one that has about 7 different forms for each verb, I understand your pain.

And no, I can only speak the most basics of the language, even after 29 of your years there

Date: 2009-03-02 06:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stormydragon.livejournal.com
Is duelling common in Sriniea? Because this language seems to almost have been deliberately designed to make it easy to accidently issue a greivous insult to someone.

Date: 2009-03-02 08:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sythyry.livejournal.com
Oh, hush.. Who would do a thing like that?

(Well, designed to express social distinctions. I don't know that it's even that exotic; I think Japanese, for one, does something similar.)

Date: 2009-03-02 09:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tuftears.livejournal.com
It seems more likely it was deliberately designed to bolster the self-esteem of the original colonists, so they can laugh over the inadequacy of foreigners and recent immigrants!

If someone marries into an original colonist family, can they or their children take the -colo suffix?

Date: 2009-03-02 09:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sythyry.livejournal.com
I think so.

I think not.

Date: 2009-09-08 05:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elorie.livejournal.com
If it works like the DAR and First Families of Virginia...then only by invitation. They couldn't make anyone who was already a member of those families use it anyway. So it would then become a way for people to express an opinion, by using it or not using it.

Date: 2009-03-03 12:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stormydragon.livejournal.com
[Yes, and the Japanese have absolutely no history of duels breaking out due to one party unintentionally offending the other. ;P ]

Date: 2009-03-03 12:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stormydragon.livejournal.com
Hypothesis: Jivu is the Srineian word for trial by combat, wherein people who feel they have been slighted can save face through fighting to the death. It's a suffix so you know people who have previously won such combat and thus aren't a good choice of people to offend.

Date: 2009-03-03 12:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sythyry.livejournal.com
[An interesting hypothesis! I hope I find out before they get to Srineia. -bb]

Date: 2009-03-03 01:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] terrycloth.livejournal.com
Oh, I thought Jivu was the false-god of Srineia, who lurked underneath the branch and implanted lucky Srineians with its-nob-jivu spawn.

Date: 2009-03-03 01:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sythyry.livejournal.com
You must have the most pleasant dreams...

Date: 2009-03-03 12:16 am (UTC)
rowyn: (content)
From: [personal profile] rowyn
I-edu am looking forward to seeing the status markers translated when context demands!

Date: 2009-03-03 12:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sythyry.livejournal.com
[I-edu dread-edu the labor of keeping-edu it-inanimate all straight!]

Date: 2009-03-03 12:26 am (UTC)
rowyn: (cute)
From: [personal profile] rowyn
Hee! Better add a status marker column to the Dramatis Personae. >:)

Date: 2009-03-03 12:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sythyry.livejournal.com
Good point. In with the sex/age/species, I guess.

Date: 2009-03-03 12:30 am (UTC)
rowyn: (smile)
From: [personal profile] rowyn
I suggest having it auto-complete the full marker for you. Since one theoretical purpose is to make it easier for newcomers to follow, and a colum with things like "nob-edu-unhi" in it is not going to make it easier to follow, even if you provide a key. :)

*laugh*

Date: 2009-03-03 11:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com
I love this! It is a perfect example of why one should violate at every opportunity the rule that authors will put their characters through any torment except learning another language. More fun than thumbscrews, hee!

Re: *laugh*

Date: 2009-03-04 12:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sythyry.livejournal.com
I considering cheating and giving them some easy way to communicate. After all, the prime languages are all fairly similar -- difference comparable to European languages.

But then I remembered that I'm not trying to make matters convenient for my characters.
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